Review – Comanche Moon by Larry McMurtry

Comanche Moon was the fourth book to be written in the Lonesome Dove series, though it is chronologically the second part of the 4-part series.

While Comanche Moon is good, it’s not as good as Lonesome Dove. It could stand alone as a decent (not great) read, the fact that it’s meant to be a prequel to Lonesome Dove is actually a detractor.

First, there are storyline continuity details that don’t match between Comanche Moon and Lonesome Dove. I admit that I’m a bit of a compulsive weanie about this sort of thing, but these inconsistencies are significant enough that I suspect they’ll bother nearly anyone.

Second, while Lonesome Dove develops characters masterfully, Comanche Moon does a slightly less good job. In keeping with the storyline continuity issues mentioned above, the characters that appear in Lonesome Dove don’t always appear to be the matured version of the characters developed in Comanche Moon. In fact, they don’t appear to be EITHER matured versions of the characters developed in Dead Man’s Walk, OR younger versions of the characters developed in Lonesome Dove.

I did enjoy the characters as the author developed them in this book, in particular the interplay between Inish Scull, Famous Shoes, and Kicking Wolf. In fact, the development of the Comanche characters alone makes this a good read for western geeks like me.

As a critique of the entire series, the lack of continuity from one book to the next is truly astonishing to me. As a series, I’d probably have to rank it with 2 stars only. If you tackle this book, do so as a stand-alone novel, and I suspect you’ll be less frustrated and perturbed by how poorly the storyline across the series fits together, and how dramatically different the same character can be from one book to the next.

I’d recommend this book to western geeks like me, especially those fascinated (like me) with stories of the southern plains and the great Comanche nation. However, for the rest of the reading public, it probably doesn’t rise to the level of “highly recommended”.

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4 thoughts on “Review – Comanche Moon by Larry McMurtry”

  1. An expansive epic sweeping through all the legends and characters that inhabited the old west Lonesome Dove was a masterpiece. All of the elements that made McMurtrys writing so distinguished — his skillful dialogue richly drawn characters and uncanny ability to establish a fully-realized setting — convened in this Pulitzer winning story of two retired Texas rangers who venture from Texas to Montana.

    1. Thanks Michael – I enjoyed Lonesome Dove too – too bad the rest of the series didn’t measure up to the high bar he set with Dove.

  2. An expansive epic sweeping through all the legends and characters that inhabited the old west Lonesome Dove was a masterpiece. All of the elements that made McMurtrys writing so distinguished — his skillful dialogue richly drawn characters and uncanny ability to establish a fully-realized setting — convened in this Pulitzer winning story of two retired Texas rangers who venture from Texas to Montana.

    1. Thanks Michael – I enjoyed Lonesome Dove too – too bad the rest of the series didn’t measure up to the high bar he set with Dove.

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